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I- I can't stop laughing! This was really funny! And imagining Johnny Cash And June Carter just made it even better! You got some talent here! ~Cassi

Okay Will do! That does make alot more sense. ~Cassi

Wow. That was amazing. I loved this!!! ~Cassi

The title doesn't fit the story at all. And i agree, it should be longer. Give readers something to hook themselves on. Explain to us why he was crying and ...

How could you ever think this was lame?! Its not just because i love poetry, honest! This has a good rhyme scheme and is very meaningful! The title fits perfectly ...

Wow. I honestly have to say I know exactly what this poem is about... Its really good though and you should keep writing, just keep to somewhat happier subjects. {Even ...

Oh don't worry. There will be a chapter one! About Asher- Why am I talking?! Its just a secret you will have to read about! ~Cassi :elephant:

Thanks! ~Cassi

One word: Wow! That was one of the best stories I have personally ever read! The emotions were spell-binding. I loved how you put it from the perspective of the ...

You lost me and I absolutely love this poem because you did! I'm not sure what it means, but it's an amazing piece of work! Just because I'm curious, What ...

Thanks for the advice! It is very helpful. About the punctuation, I wasn't sure if i should have added it or not, because i didn't know if I could make ...