Published April 25, 2010
I thought this would be a fun song. I thought about Johnny Cash and June Carter singing it. It may be awful but I think it's fun! 
Duet: Just One Dance, Please
Guy: Girl, I haven't seen you here before in this place,
But I see you have spice and some southern grace.
Girl: Unlike you honey, you're a dancing disgrace!
I think you're drinking too many to keep up my pace.
(Chorus)
Girl:Besides, boy, I'm outta your league!
Guy: Oh, girl, just one dance please?
...........................................
Guy: Mind if we do a fast jig on the floor,
Spin you around and do a little twirl?
Girl: Nope, honey find you another girl,
I've already been taken by a man who's name is Earl.
(Chorus)
Girl:Besides, boy, I'm outta your league!
Guy: Oh, girl, just one dance please?
................................................
Guy: Well, can Earl strum a six string like this?
Or give you such as this: a big ol' kiss?
Girl: You better back off, or I'll kick you where you piss!
You sure don't know how to treat a little miss.
(Chorus)
Girl:Besides, boy, I'm outta your league!
Guy: Oh, girl, just one dance please?
...............................................
Guy: What's it gonna hurt, can't you tell?
As soon as I seen you, my heart just fell.
Girl: Well, I didn't mean to put you under my spell,
With my piercing green eyes and my raspberry smell.
...............................................
Guy: Oh, beautiful, I'll even right you a song.
Girl: Well, maybe I might have been a little wrong.
Guy: You see girl, it ain't so bad.
Girl: But this might make Earl really mad.
Guy: I'm sure glad you gave me a try.
Girl: Here comes Earl, this is our goodbye.
Guy: When will I see you ever again?
Girl: Well, honey that really depends....
Besides, Boy, I'm outta your league!
.......
Boy: Oh, girl, one last dance please?
Girl: I'm outta your league.
Boy: One last (one last) one last dance please?
Girl: Oh, no, no, no.....
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I agree. Thank's everyone!
That is really fun. The only thing that stood out though was the line "I've already been taken by a man who's name is Earl" sounds a little awacard. Maybe you can do something like "I've already bean taken by a man named Earl" or something like that to make it a little smother. But otherwise, that was good.
Haha, this was great! Good rhythm.
Lol, this is going to be stuck in my head for a while!I love how she's kinda falling for him in the end, and changing her mind.
You sure do have talent! Keep on writing-
KD
Thank you sooo much zebraskittles!
I'm not used to doing lyrics but I'm learning.
I- I can't stop laughing! This was really funny! And imagining Johnny Cash And June Carter just made it even better! You got some talent here!
~Cassi