ZannaShepherd

Thank you for your very helpful review and insight on my story ! I really appreciate all of the help that I can get! It's been a long time since ...

Thank you SO much! I too love Beauty and the Beast, it's my favorite Disney movie of all time! I really appreciate your very thorough and insightful review it was ...

You're very welcome! We only improve as we practice and you're going strong, just keep it up :)

Hello, Ok, I thought this was a pretty good start to a story, a little short, but I mean I'd like to read more if that's any hint. Anywho, I ...

Sorry about the weird spacing, not sure why it did that, and I don't know how to fix it.

Thank you to everyone who reviewed this. I really don't know how to write poetry, but my computer broke and so I was bored and started scribbling in a notebook, ...

Thank you so much to everyone, who read and reviewed/commented on Tears of a Fairy! I re-edited it, and I hope I was able to improve it. Feel free to ...

Thanks for the advice, I'll go over my piece and try to fix it a little more. Sorry about the comma's that's a big problem for me (obviously). Also how ...

Interesting concept, I really like your writing style. I didn't find any gramatical errors, so thumbs up to that! Good luck, have fun. and keep up the great work! ~Zanna ...

OK I'm back. I finished reading it (finally, I hate not having internet!) and the ending was great! I only found a couple more things, that seemed noteable to mention. ...

I really liked this piece, It has great potential of becoming an awesome story! Everything I saw that I had questions about, or needed changing someone already pointed out, so ...

Sounds like it could be interesting! Good Luck, and have fun!

Thanks for Reviewing my work! I fixed what you mentioned, I didn't change the introduction, because it's supposed to be narrated. Thank you for your input! ~Zanna

Sorry about that, (I had computer problems) :evil: OK, continuing where I left off: (and remember I'm just a beginner, and I have really no right to critique others writing. ...

Hey there, Thank you everyone for critiquing my work! I changed several things and re posted a new draft. Here's the link if you wish to see it. I really ...