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Hey Lacey, I'm Izzy and I'll be giving you a quick review today. Just remember to keep up those reviews. You should always be reviewing at least twice as many ...

Hey Kristen. Just read your piece and It really made me laugh, reminded me off how thought flow freely through someone head. By the way before I review, Welcome to ...

Hey Kat, I definitely agree with ellinor, this is all jumbled. You need to give it some substance, some description, some life! Instead of pointing out everything, I will just ...

Hey Izzy. I'm called Izzy too, just not on Yws. I really liked this, it reminded me a little of my own style of writing and a story I wrote ...

I love this, I really do. I don't have much else to so because I just did love it. At first I thought it was a phone conversation, but then ...

Wow!!! LOVE THIS. It's crazy, that's what I like about it; because every single line you get this burst of alliteration and then wonderfully strange images popping into your head. ...

Hey , nice poem you have here. I like the idea of the cycle, day in, day out, always hurt and pain. Well I don't like it, but I think ...

The first thing I noticed is that you capitalize the first letter of every sentence. I don't find this nessescary, but it is truly up to you.. I laughed for ...

I really liked this. Granted the vocoularly is simplistic and It could use working on for a bit but I loved the structure of the stanzas and how it ended. ...

Okay, I actually liked this which surprised me. It's quite typical, psychopathic murderer stereotype but I liked it, it was edgy. I don't have much to add other than the ...

Hey ella, nice song you've got here. I'm sure you've worked out some chords to this, I'd love to here it on the guitar sometime. I did like this, especially ...

Very good :] I love your vocabulary, it's wonderful and perfect for the feelings you portray here. I'm not very good at reviewing poems like this, because I'm generally to ...

Hey I'm Izzy, I'm just giving you a quick review. First of all may I say you have some impressive vocabulary here, nice work, and I like the frame work ...

Hey beth, review as promised :] Again, sorry if I'm harsh. Sooo...I'm gonna say now that I really didn't like the first part of this. I thought it was confusing. ...

I don't think you need to go into any detail about Alice. She's more a symbol of hope of your MC, it could have just been a stranger he talked ...