Yuriiko

You're welcome! :) Yeah, I did notice the story transition was similar from a TV format- with the constant change of scenes and the fast-paced plot. But it wasn't really ...

I see and yeah I totally agree it's important not to overdo descriptions. ^^ I apologize for being too nitpicky and I know there are still a lot of things ...

Oh now I see. I think that's a great device in providing the historical background, but remember, we are writing for the readers, not for the characters. ^^ As what ...

Hello there! I actually read this two days ago but didn't have the time to review it. So... here I am. First of all, I thoroughly enjoyed this. You have ...

Hello there! First of all, you have an intriguing plot. I sensed that you were going for a dark nonchalant tone throughout the story. What I think you need to ...

The poem is sweet. However, overall, the poem's portrayal of the message is awkwardly structured. Imagine a person reading this to you or vice versa, they will hear these pauses ...

Hello there. First off, I totally agree with Snoink's review above. Don't worry, I'm not going to repeat and point out every errors and common mistakes I have noticed since ...

This should be published!

Okay. Here for my second review. This would be a bit quick since my eyes can't take the screen anymore. I'm currently typing this down at exactly midnight. ^^ As ...

Is he stuck up there, and that's the eerie end? Perhaps some elaboration might be needed, a continuance of the same story. Thank you Wayward. I'll be taking your suggestion ...

Thank you guys for your reviews! I really appreciate it and going to take those into account. I really need to work on my syllabication. 83 Thanks again!

Oh my, Jash. You don't have to post that. xD *flies away*

I've seen the movie. :D

Thank you so much guys for the review! Shubhi- I changed the opening line and about the setting, the girl accompanied the boy in the airport because the guy has ...