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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: "Unfortunately... I love you" Chapter 2 (Draft #1)

    Hello there, Solva! Here to you-know-it. :wink: I won't review much or bother your grammatical errors since EAHailstone has pretty much covered it all. I'm just going to do some ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: A Criminal's Heart- Chapter-8

    Hello there, Shubhi! Here as requested. First of all, you might some see a part of my review repeated, it's because I haven't read everything that the readers above me ...

    Jun 18, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sinful pride - Chapter 1

    Hello there, Kyousuke! *bows down* Sorry, this took me a day to review 'cause you caught me during school. Yep, school in our place have just started last week. So ...

    Jun 16, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Story, The Song, and The Picture (chapter one)

    Hello there, Dark! Here to you-know-it. (As requested) Okay, you'll see this review, a not-so-lengthy one 'cause the previous readers above me said already the things that I'm supposed to ...

    Jun 15, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Night Isn't Always Quiet {1}

    Hello there, Tianna! Here to review. (As requested) CHAPTER ONE Daylight Doesn't Always Stop The Nightmares (This is good, yeah!) MALLORY WOKE WITH A GASP. THE DREAM HAD (I don't ...

    Jun 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Would you care?

    Hello there, Lily! Here to review. (As requested) :wink: Would you care ? Look me in the eyes , And tell me you care , (I prefer you used another ...

    Jun 14, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I really really really cannot think of a title

    Best scenario: H e calls and tells me how much he has been thinking about last night. He tells me he does not regret what happened at all, and assures ...

    Jun 12, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Night Isn't Always Quiet {prologue}

    I'll stop loving you When diamonds never sparkle And flowers cease to grow When thunder never echoes And rivers don't flow When hearts no longer wonder And hands are never ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Secret Betrayal

    Hello there! Here to review. I trusted you With all of my heart With all of my soul With I trusted you Those two lines are kind of cliche' to ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: That FALL Day Chapter 1

    Hello there, Cindy! Here to review. "Fay get up now!" Oh great , the lovely voice of my mother, sheesh who need an alarm clock. (If you placed dailogues coming ...

    Jun 10, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1: When Love Comes Knocking

    Hello there, Tenyo! Here to review. On December 17th, I walked up the metal staircase to my floor of the apartment building. I lived on my own, funded by my ...

    Jun 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Breeze

    Hi there! Here to you-know-it. :wink: In the wind we play, wrathing in the air. I was confused a bit when I read that word. So I think you meant ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: (Name to be determined) A short story

    Hi there! First off, I just want to say Welcome to YWS! How are you doing so far? So, I'm here to give you a review. :wink: John woke with ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Kate v. Zane (3)

    Hello there! Here to give you a you-know-it. :wink: “Sprite,” comments the boy, his eyebrows raised. “I figured you for a Root Beer kind of person.” Why did the boy ...

    Jun 7, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Face(less)book_Chap_1.1

    Hello there! Here to review. “Everybody , pay attention (an exclamation point or a period would be needed to end this statement) ” Mrs. Ghosh said to call the class ...

    Jun 6, 2010


I like to create sympathy for my characters, then set the monsters loose.
— Stephen King