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Re: Discovery
Hello there! Thanks for the request. :wink: Nitpicks on the way: It’s the F ourth of July and it’s really hot outside. I think you don't need to make the ...
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Wilting Rose *100 Points to Every 200+ Word Review!*
Hello there, Munch! Here to review as requested. :wink: She was sitting next to me on the old wooden deck, the cool, clear water of the lake barely tickling her ...
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Goodbye Nick (EDITED)
Hello there! Here to... guess what? Corrections and comments in RED . :wink: *** Hello! This is the edited version of my story. Thanks to captain.classy, bluewaterlily, Flower~Child, and penguinduan1 ...
Jul 2, 2010 -
Re: FREAK
Hello there, Snoink! First off, I'm very honored that I'm the 20th person to like this! hehe. :D I was going to read this before, last month I think. But ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: If Roses Grew Where Petals Fall
Hello there! *gives two thumbs up* I saw this in the Staff pick section and decided to have a look on this. I say, I'm really impressed and this is ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Bluelight (formerly known as The Robot...Human Hair)
Hello there! :D I find this piece very interesting and you left it hanging whichi's a good thing, anyway. The more your readers will be motivated to read the next ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Dreaming By The Window (short story)
Hello there, Solva! Here to review. Nitpicks on the way, okay? “The sky is not mad... I mean, can't you feel it? That's nature singing for us and God is ...
Jun 29, 2010 -
Re: Rosalie (Short Piece)
Hello there, KD! I miss your voice. I miss your voice that comforted me in the worst times. I'm not sure of this, just in my opinion. I don't think ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: There Once Lived A Girl...
Hello there, SD! Here to review. :wink: He was eleven, she was eleven. He loved baseball, she loved baseball. He was her neighbor, she was his neighbor. She hated him, ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Smile Kid
Hello there! I find this really interesting and a very heartwarming song. I like the message behind it and this is good to be a song. You should definitely try ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Sinful Pride - Chapter 2 (Revised)
Hello there, kyou! Here to you-know-what. :mrgreen: Chapter 2 Death huh… Despite the adrenaline that made me grin and care less, I still could feel presence of death around. It ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Ecole des Monstres: Chapter I
Hello there! Sorry this took me a while to review this 'cause you caught me during school stuffs and homeworks. :wink: First off, I must really say that I like ...
Jun 22, 2010 -
Re: secrets
Hello there! Here to review. :D There are many things in this world that are unknown to many and so they are named the term secrets. ( Your starting line ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: My baby Kronus
Hello there! EDIT: Okay, you might see this vague or something related to that because other readers above me corrected the things I saw already and I don't like repeating ...
Jun 20, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Hello there! :smt001 *lands for a review* “And what about you?” I, object. " A husband protects his wife.” I bury him in the unused farmland behind my house, but ...
Jun 19, 2010
