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Hello there, Hope! Here to review. I definitely (and totally) agree with Ranger Hawk about your grammar, spellings, punctuations in dialogs and everything. However, everyone improves gradually and tha

Hello there, Skinnykins! Here to review. :3 Okay. I don't think I still have to do a line by line nitpick, since I've noticed lots of good critiques before me. ...

Hello there! Here as requested. Corrections in RED . T hat they needed a hero. Yup, that ' s me, every other scheme. Now I ’m a juvenile delinquent. Hunter ...

Hello there Solva! Maybe one thing that you need to make this poem clearer is that you should try to connect (more) the narrator and the 'stranger' well. It seems ...

Hello there Fuji Apple! Here as promised. First of all, I want to apologize in advance for the (really long) delay, it's just because of the homeworks that came and ...

Hello there! Here as promised and I'm going to apologize for the long delay. I just got a homework 'attack' these past few days. So I hope this is going ...

Hello there, Jash! *deep breath* Here as requested. :3 So far, so good. I was actually kind of surprised when I scrolled down and noticed that this chapter's a bit ...

Hello there, Spike! I'm here to review. Corrections in RED . Of all the living beings that were formed , there was a particular species of hairless apes who were ...

Hello there, Maddy! Here as requested. :3 So, I think you made a pretty good start. However, I was just a bit confused about your main character. You didn't seem ...

Hello there, Rain! First of all and grammatically speaking, I think you're confused on proper usage of "They're" and "Their". And I really have to agree with those previous reviewers ...

Hello there! Here to review. So, I think you should've made the storyline a bit slower and try to 'really' connect it with your characters. I mean, I get confused ...

Hey there! Here to review as requested. First of all, I'm going to apologize in advance if ever you see this review totally unhelpful. I mean, this piece is very ...

Hello there Jash! First off, I think I really owe you big time. I apologize for the delay of this because I got carried away with the assignments, projects and ...

Hello there! Here as requested. :wink: First of all, considering that this is the prologue, I think you have written this well. However, I could get the feeling that this ...

Hello there again, BlueShubs! Here to review as promised. Okay. I don't think I need to do anymore a line by line review, seeing those previous critiques above me. First ...