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yeah i did. I hope it's clear now what i'm trying to say.

thats exactly what i wanted to say. i guess i just structured it wrong. i feel like we are really not the ones to judge. thank you anyway. i edited ...

hi thank you for the review. i re-read it an i get what you are trying to say about the homosexuality topic. what i wanted to convey is that we ...

oh right......now the poem makes sooooo much sense. you are fantasizing!!!!! there must be alot of mohit doodles on your notebook...

thanks. i appreciate it :)

hi eros just want to say that i like your modification. i sing this to my nephew all the time but your modification just got me thinking. does Mohit mean ...

hi eros just want to say that i like your modification. i sing this to my nephew all the time but your modification just got me thinking. does Mohit mean ...

no problemo. i read my review and i had some spelling mistakes too. oops...

sorry my hand slipped and it got clicked. i wrote one just now. hope u like it.

wow! i really like your poem. it's simple and easy to understand but there is so much more depth in the words. for me its simplicity brings out its forcefulness.

seems like every person has a story to tell.

seems like every person has a story to tell.A good format.I like it.The abecedarian format gave a sense of the poets feeling while the word were expressed to prove a ...