YourLowness

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First things first: please don't post all your chapters together, because it makes for one hell of a long read and then the fiddle of trying to review all in ...

So I got to this work and my eyes started bleeding! There are so many huge paragraphs here and it is way too big to read. Start breaking down those ...

Is this fact or fiction? Cos it's impossible for me to decide. I am not keen on works that aren't clear because they confused me. 'He enjoys running. He is ...

Obviously, I say in response to your title. You've got it relevant and funny and just brilliant. Like this: "Numerous times my friends and I have tried to have a ...

So.... you either haven't posted anything in a long time or ever. That I have read. I give thee a reverse welcome. LOL. Right, you told me to review, so ...

Love the title. No so in love with the work: 'My pretty valentine, you kill me with those eyes of yours. My pretty valentine, my rosy cheeks turn pale, my ...

I haven't followed your story, so it may be a bit unfair of me to comment. But, you have some good writing here. Although, I would say the majority of ...

This could have been a short story I don't know whether that's your thing or not, but this definitely has potential for growth. I would have appreciated some end of ...

It's a bit weird reading about a work you've never heard of, and yeah.... I thought I would give this a go anyway. The Bear and the Shithead is a ...

So.. why this so called villain is giving the reader a lesson: '(or lord in Latin)' I do not know. But it's very odd and not very suited to the ...

I am only reviewing this so I get pancakes. Lulz First off, there could have been more spacing here. Or spacing at all really, because it is severely lacking. It ...

This work was interesting. Adaptations go one way or the other, but you seem to have put your own spin on this urban legend with ease. I have a criticism, ...

Yooooooooooooo. Do I understand this work? NO! XD Am I meant to? -shrug- XD I love the rhyming you've got going on here with 'dip' 'chip' and 'hip'. In terms ...

Right. me again. I am trying to work out what the hell this piece means! On surface level, it's just very random, but you seem like a kinda serious issues ...