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  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Suicide note

    Thank you for reviewing! I've corrected the grammar errors as I didn't even notice the apostrophe... Have a great day and a happy new year, Rubes x

    Dec 31, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Suicide note

    Thank you so much! The last part was intentional. As if I were telling the story of myself and clarifying it at the end. I have a bad habit of ...

    Dec 24, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Her everything

    Thank you! Yeah, it does seem hard to understand, probably because of the ambiguous approach to my very personal life. I get why it doesn't really work; thank you though! ...

    Dec 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Her everything

    Thank you so much! It is all to do with teacher attachment... which is concerning in itself. Thank you for the kind words and advice :) Rubes x

    Dec 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Her everything

    Thank you. The tone shifts weren't intentional; just writing my feelings down. All to do with teacher attachment, which you definitely wouldn't expect in this. It may make more sense ...

    Dec 3, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Naked Eye

    Nice concept :) I really enjoyed it x

    Sep 25, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops

    Thank you :) very much appreciated x

    Sep 19, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops

    thank you :)

    Sep 19, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops

    Thank you, for most of my works I tend to just write from the heart for an hour or so and just put it out there. I haven't written in ...

    Sep 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: If you adopt me.

    Thank you so much, it is much appreciated :)

    Sep 1, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: If you adopt me.

    Thank you so much! I appreciate it x

    Aug 28, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: The lost blood of love

    Thank you so much! And I hope you're doing better now. My PMs are always open x

    Aug 27, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: If you adopt me.

    Thank you so much; I have 15 days til school starts again... I've missed her so much for real, she called me from my friend's phone when I wasn't in ...

    Aug 23, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: The lost blood of love

    Thank you so much! I have made changes you requested, as it seemed better and more descriptive. This review has definitely helped improve this piece so I thank for your ...

    Aug 4, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Realistic Re: The lost blood of love

    Thank you so much; your review is very helpful!

    Aug 4, 2021


For a short space of time I remained at the window watching the pallid lightnings that played above Mont Blanc and listening to the rushing of the Arve, which pursued its noise way beneath. The same lulling sounds acted as a lullaby to my too keen sensations; when I placed my head upon my pillow, sleep crept over me; I felt it as it came and blessed the giver of oblivion.
— Mary Shelley, Frankenstein