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  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Suicide note

    Thank you for reviewing! I've corrected the grammar errors as I didn't even notice the apostrophe... Have a great day and a happy new year, Rubes x

    Dec 30, 2021

  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Suicide note

    Thank you so much! The last part was intentional. As if I were telling the story of myself and clarifying it at the end. I have a bad habit of ...

    Dec 24, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Her everything

    Thank you! Yeah, it does seem hard to understand, probably because of the ambiguous approach to my very personal life. I get why it doesn't really work; thank you though! ...

    Dec 3, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Her everything

    Thank you so much! It is all to do with teacher attachment... which is concerning in itself. Thank you for the kind words and advice :) Rubes x

    Dec 3, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic
    Re: Her everything

    Thank you. The tone shifts weren't intentional; just writing my feelings down. All to do with teacher attachment, which you definitely wouldn't expect in this. It may make more sense ...

    Dec 3, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: Naked Eye

    Nice concept :) I really enjoyed it x

    Sep 25, 2021

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health
    Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops

    Thank you :) very much appreciated x

    Sep 19, 2021

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health
    Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops

    thank you :)

    Sep 19, 2021

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Health
    Re: The girl that sits on the rooftops

    Thank you, for most of my works I tend to just write from the heart for an hour or so and just put it out there. I haven't written in ...

    Sep 18, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Health
    Re: If you adopt me.

    Thank you so much, it is much appreciated :)

    Sep 1, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Health
    Re: If you adopt me.

    Thank you so much! I appreciate it x

    Aug 28, 2021

  • Short Story » Health, Realistic
    Re: The lost blood of love

    Thank you so much! And I hope you're doing better now. My PMs are always open x

    Aug 26, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, Health
    Re: If you adopt me.

    Thank you so much; I have 15 days til school starts again... I've missed her so much for real, she called me from my friend's phone when I wasn't in ...

    Aug 23, 2021

  • Short Story » Health, Realistic
    Re: The lost blood of love

    Thank you so much! I have made changes you requested, as it seemed better and more descriptive. This review has definitely helped improve this piece so I thank for your ...

    Aug 4, 2021

  • Short Story » Health, Realistic
    Re: The lost blood of love

    Thank you so much; your review is very helpful!

    Aug 4, 2021


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