Youngwriter724

Starting off i haven't read the rest of your story, as i believe reading the entirety of ones work pulls me into focusing on the story and distracts me from ...

i want to start by saying that i haven't read the rest of this book as i feel like reading all of ones collective work, gets me drawn into the ...

I just want to start by saying I love the story, and i'm relieved that i find your main characters companion more interesting (that is if Aidan is the main ...

To start i just want to say i love the story and the dramatic tone. The way you subtly described the setting as well as several characters i thought was ...

Wonderful story, I love how you describe the morning probably the most. I really love how well written your dialoge is. And how you describe your charicters. I really felt ...

Alright well I should start off by saying wow. There have been very few pieces I have read and actually enjoyed on this site. But this was amazing I was ...

I want to start off by saying that I like your story. But I did notice a few things, for example their were a few sentences with missing words or ...

Hi there my name is George, I enjoyed your story. I am going to go over a few things that I feel would help your writing and please don’t take ...

Wow. that was just creepy as hell. there were no errors that stood out to me. when I started to read the story I had no idea what to expect, ...

There are a few spelling errors that stood out, but for the most part it was well written. It was very good though. it is obvious that your strength is ...

Alright then. it took me a moment to figure out what was going on, but i finally did. lmao. i just want to tell you that i didn't see any ...

There are some minor errors, but overall I love the story. Your character is awesome so far, and your description of the dream at the beginning was really well written. ...

Wow, I agree with the previous comment that was some amazing work, and I too could see it being an incredible novel. But I also have to say that it ...

well, that was some amazing writing, i wish i could give you pointers or tell you what was wrong about it. but i could find nothing wrong with it. there ...

Wow, that is some of the best work ive read on this site. they are both good, but if i had to choose one, it would have to be the ...