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Re: Lipstick on His Collar
THIS IS AWESOME But Deep
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not Perfect.
Wow It Was Really Really Short I Would love to have more
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: False Impressions Hurt
i really like im in shock woot woot
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: Toxic Personality
WOW you need to fix this part Scream Yell, Throw a fit. Lose your mind. Leave home, Choose your friends. Choose her,, I don't care. Be selfish. But Over All ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Insomnia
So we walk, On and on, Until the dawn, Of the morning sun, It's in its wake, That I, Insomniac, Will sleep. Great Grammar and stuff just AWESOME
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: He Makes Me
You Did GREAT :) I never used to dream, At all, Never used to fall asleep, Easily, He makes it easier.
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Relate
THIS IS great right here Interaction is but a fraction, When oceans are between us, Petty friends have no relation, To our wounds, they are callous
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Sleep Talk
Shaken. Stitched. Sore and sewn shut. that was kinda choppy right there but over all AWESOME JOB!!!!
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: End Of The World
will hold your hand, And I will beg for you to stay. THAT was my fave part you did great :D
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Labyrinth: Chapter One
This is very Nice kinda sad i love the ENDING
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Things I'm Afraid Of
THIS IS AWESOME kinda jelly becase you awesome v.v
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Want It
i like this
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Midnight Dance
THIS WAS AWESOME O_O LOVE THIS PART O_O Darling, let's dance. The owls and crickets coo, the sky is dark with specks of color here and there, so let's dance.
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: x (to delete
i Really like it it This is amzing
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: Tristesse
I Loved it this was really outstanding Dance away, oh lovely one. A rendering of lukewarm kindness, until all is but a tepid memory. Cursed resonance, unassailable hum, and then ...
Aug 18, 2011
