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I thoroughly enjoyed the poem. I thought the way the poem was structured helped to convey the continuous process of moving on. The question at the end is a creative ...

Hi! :) I've read your previous two chapters and I loved both of them and had no criticisms for there at all, I might be your biggest fan! Anyway, getting ...

Hey, so I read the prologue to "Elementals" and I really enjoyed it so I thought I would continue on. To begin with, I must say that it's a good ...

The prologue definitely sparked my interest and I wanted to continue reading it. The introduction is good because it's straight to the point and right away we know what or ...

Hey, so this is my review :) I like the theme and the rawness of the material that your brought into the poem. The pain is evident and that's the ...

This broke my heart into tiny pieces. It was depressing and tragic. But it was brilliant. This is the case for so many families in the world and although I ...

Hi, I want to review this because I feel like it has a lot of potential :) 1. I like Fang's character, he actually makes me smile. 2. I think ...

I might be reading too much in the poem and seeing things that aren't really there but it seems to me that the transition to winter in the poem could ...

That was really beautiful and inspiring. This is the kind of work that makes me want to do something as touching. The raw emotion can be related to but it's ...