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Hmm. I don't really have anything to edit content wise. It's obviously just a little snap shot. I don't wanna spoil it and cover it with red ink, do i? ...

Mmmm.....Alright. I didn't like it. I liked the idea, and I liked the fact that as a fan of John Lennon, you were still able to paint Chapman in a ...

Very nice, I'm happy you put "most" this time, even though 99.9 DNA is absolutely correct, dear. Nevertheless, I really like the continuation. Penny seems just as unique as Lorraine ...

Is there a reason why you say "Charlotte" excessively in the first paragraph? It was a bit bothersome. Correction, it's not the "Charlotte"s really, it's just seeing "Ch"s together. It ...

"She WAS a poison to the world, poison…" Change that, need the "was" there. "her nails breaking its skin as she broke once again into a run." She broke the ...

Actually it's more than 50 percent of their DNA. I'm a biology nut, you see, in fact identical twins share about...99.9 percent of their DNA. The similarities are extravagantly close. ...

delicate wings as fragile as the bones in a newborn's foot. Ewwww...why are you breaking new born babies' foots? Haha, I kid. I really do. A poem based off the ...

DID YOU SEE THE HAND IN THAT EYE? WICKED!!!!!!!! But to the story "jiggled and jaggled" lol how trite. Don't use passé phrases like this anymore if you want to ...

"Seth shook his bandmate, finally deciding to just slap him a couple times with the pillow, safely tucked in a green and black plaid pillowcase." How about: "Seth shook is ...

Uh, I thought Alexandrian poems had 12 syllables....but, if you say so. The beats are a bit off. Trust me, I counted. If evolution be false - (7) a malice ...

Yeah...well..that's lovely. I got the message across and carried out the purpose. It really didn't have a form or anything, so I guess I can't really critique it. It seemed ...

HAHAHA! You wrote that in like 5 seconds didn't you? Please don't post something like that again, I mean, not unless it's with some more poems, I feel bad that ...

Haha.....bookmarker LMAO! Uh, yeah. I liked the imagery, but sadly Qultur is right. There's no purpose and no meaning to it, so yes it was imaginative and interesting to read ...

Hello. Yeah, so I'm a stickler for rhythm and rhyme and I am really glad I chose your poem today to revise. HA HA, bringing back old memories is a ...

I don't need to do grammar, because Sadie is a real stickler for grammar and I trust she's got everything squared, but I will actually take a look at the ...