Published July 23, 2008
here is my poem that my friends and i composed:
Harry,Harry,Harry Potter!
Has a mgical wand!
He can cast a spell and send you to hell
but he will never be james bond!
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HAHAHA! You wrote that in like 5 seconds didn't you?
Please don't post something like that again, I mean, not unless it's with some more poems, I feel bad that you wasted your points on that. lol.
Still, I am going to critique it for serious (edits are in the commas):
Harry,Harry,Harry Potter!
Has a (magical) wand!
He can cast a spell (shifted downwards for stylistic purposes)
and send you to hell
but (deleted "he will" for rhythmic purposes) never be (J)ames (B)ond!
haha....have fun.