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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Timothy Sees Santa

    Greetings from The Swordsman!!! This was a very cute story. The mind of a child is a wonderful thing to behold. (I would know I have two of them!) I ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Danse Macabre

    Greetings once again from The Swordsman!!! Interesting how selecting two random pieces from the Green Room has gotten me the same author. Interesting. Anyway! This was an interesting piece. I ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Divergence Point

    Greetings from The Swordsman!!!! This was a truly unique piece. Granted it is a well used idea, meeting yourself from another timeline, but you put a really fresh twist on ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: The Epping Forest

    Greetings from The Swordsman! Going to get right to the review with a paragraph by paragraph review of what I think. *****First Paragraph***** In the first paragraph, I really like ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: The Basement Secrets : Chapter 2

    Greetings from The Swordsman!!! To start off I am going to address a few grammatical errors that I caught: *"Shouldn't Al my boyfriend of four months be doing this?" There ...

    Nov 9, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fear married my soul and I was not invited

    Greetings from The Swordsman!!! This was an interesting piece. Overall I liked it. It depicts the way that life will throw us a curve ball from the very start. Fear ...

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Void: prologue

    Greetings from The Swordsman!!!! I have to say that this was a rather interesting piece. I understand that is it the beginning of the story, but I am left as ...

    Oct 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Stillborn

    Greetings from The Swordsman! I have to say that this is an interesting piece that leaves me questioning at the end of it all. To start off however, I would ...

    Oct 27, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Wong

    Greetings from The Swordsman! Okay....though this was short, even short for a short story, it speaks volumes to what life is like today. Kids, from elementary to high school are ...

    Jul 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Hunt: Chapter 1; I get a psychopathic goldfish

    Greetings from The Swordsman! Okay, this was.....interesting. A gigantic gold fish with a desire to kill every human that likes to eat fish, and for some reason or another has ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Blank Sheet

    Greetings from The Swordsman! This was a really good start to this story. Though it seems more like the start of a chapter than a prologue. I would have to ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Last Light Companion [Chapter 1.2]

    Greetings from The Swordsman! There is nothing that you particularly did, but I couldn't get into the story on this. It is partially because I haven't read the rest of ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 2

    Greetings from The Swordsman! Okay. Your title didn't really catch my eye, might be something to look into, but holy cow that short description made me HAVE to read this ...

    Jun 28, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 3

    Greetings from The Swordsman! I know that this is the third chapter, and I would likely have a better understanding of what was going on with the first two chapters, ...

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Terrible Youth of Freznel: 24

    Greetings from The Swordsman! Having jumped in at the twenty-fourth chapter, I have to say that I am a little confused by what is going on. However, with the chapter ...

    Jun 27, 2016


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