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And then titling this piece "Chapter One: Prologue" is a bit backwards; prologues come before any chapters, usually just to serve as a bit of an info-giver or a hook. ...

Yo go brotha! Power to you. My daddy is an oncologist/epidemiologist and studies this stuff( and I plan to), and we'll fight until you defeat this genetic monster. Yessssssssss!!!!! And ...

Thanks so much for the suggestions. I totally see where you are coming from! Thank you. Really appreciate it. My poet side won't let me go..* cries* lol ----------------- -Jojo

Thanks so much for the reviews! I guess that the whole "poetry spacing" thing is an old habit of mine.I've been an amateur poet up until now. Hard to kick.lol ...

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Muchas gracias! Sorry I couldn't respond right away b/c I was at a debate tournament. Thanks for the reviews!

Thanks for the review(s)!

I love this!!! *claps* This really made my day. No more of that depressing stuff. Very Humerus. Five stars! I love prose and poetry... Keep writing! ------------------------------- -jojo.

This is a really nice poem, and funny. At first, it seems like you are talking about a lover or something. And in the end, you talk about the worst ...

Well, all the grammar has been taken care of, and I see what both sides feel. Thanks for the feedback. Let's leave it at that! ----------------- -jojo

I think posum had a little glitch, he did that on other things two. . . Anyways, the poem. I both like and dislike the poem. For my likes, I ...

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Thanks for the kind review! And I apologize if anyone takes offense. ------------------- -Jojo.

True, and if you have any further complaints or problems, please pm me privatly, so we don't waste reviewing space an turn this into a debate forum. No one is ...

If you were offended, you could just say it straight up, you know? Be direct. I'll break this poem down later on, and give MY facts and experiences to explain ...