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Re: The biggest risk I ever took & How I survived biology class
I haven't had time to fully read this, but there was just one thing I couldn't overlook. The title. It's an automatic *ugh*. It doesn't sound right , and I ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Intimacies
Wow, I'm impressed. The world is ending. I have to say, I actually liked this poem of yours. It comes together and forms a proper, complete thought. With real meaning. ...
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Convictions
And you speak my mind once again. I agree with this whole-heartedly. So if I'm not trying to change you, Why the aggressive attitude? My convictions couldn't be clearer, and ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Im Too Young For Love
Heya, my friend! I love this, and you're right. You ARE too young for love, so stay in school!!! Just one thing that I didn't see anyone else catch... But ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: Not Forever
I like this a lot. It brings a very nice question. So I won't love you forever, I want to love you today. 'Cause when you think about it, how ...
Aug 17, 2011 -
Re: If you're talking to the moon
Heya, I'm Jojo, and I shall be your reviewer for today! This is actually very clever, but it's missing something, here... ...maybe you could make it longer? Grammar is in ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Meeting Jesus (contes entry)
I , for one, like it. But I also have a tendency to be partial to works that show the true side of Christ. Even still... *likes* However a few ...
Aug 6, 2011 -
Re: Once, I Was Mother Nature
Hello! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Once, I ruled the oceans, And held the sky ...
Aug 5, 2011 -
Re: Army of God (Act Two) - deleted
'ello, Chum! I shall do a failed attempt at a review! -- I think it's great. I can't actually write a proper review because I don't usually review screenplays and ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Freaks
This is what I'd like to call RAW poetry. They cannot understand- We cannot understand always. Yet our knowledge is simple: Be us, Stand out, Be hated. *Our guide is ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Who's To Say?
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! I apologize in advance for the pitiful and unhelpful bit of words that I am about to give you... ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: No More Judging
Hello, I'm Jojo, and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . -- Really nice! Just a few thoughts... Then , ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Rainbow Moon
Heya! I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today! Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Fists soaked in crimson *Crimson-soaked fists , clothes ripped ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: True Colors
Hello, I am Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today. Grammar/punctuation are in red . Others are in blue . --- Hapless shades of silkscreened silk-screened past, glowing ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Im not sure where this came from me.
Hello, I'm Jojo and I shall be your reviewer for today1 Grammar is in red . Others are in blue . Pain , so sharp;( semicolon ) W hy won't ...
Jun 29, 2011
