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Very nice. Any writer could relate to this. I've been wondering if someone brings words forth like I do. You do, I can picture you with the poetic energy infront ...

Wow, I really liked this. It was emotional and told a story but I don't feel like the story was finished. I feel like there was more you could have ...

Wow, again. This was awesome. I definitely can relate to you. In all ways. The anxiety in the first poem I reviewed of yours and in the convulsions (Both from ...

Wow. I know I say that on allot of reviews but I really mean "Wow." on this one. This was breathtaking and I'm just about speechless. The only thing that ...

First, this should be rated at the least +16. Other than that, this poem was walking the line of good or bad clumsily. Sometimes stepping to one side or the ...

This was a cute poem. the only problem I had with it was the ending. I felt like you were preparing the reader for heartbreak or something very powerful and ...

Wow, is what came to mind while reading this. Wow at the emotion, at the words you used to describe it and wow at the situation. You are a very ...

This is a good first chapter or intro for a novel or short story but is to short alone. Your lacking in information, in the first chapter of a story ...

I think this poem would work better if there was some kind of pattern. Some of the lines in it seem very out of place because of the lack of ...

I enjoyed this even though it was a bit sad. It was cute and had a decent storyline to it. The grammatical errors are fixable but easily overlooked. Try reading ...

I really liked this one. I did find a couple things that could be improved though. In this line, Her family does not see All the scars on her arms ...

I like this piece but it seemed kind of choppy to me. I'm not one to nit pick at grammar or punctuation but it's important in pieces like this. It ...

Overall, I liked this poem. It had allot of emotion in it and writing about cutting is a rough topic to cover but you did it well. I agree that ...

I loved this poem! If it was any shorter, I would think it were unfinished. I loved that you rhymed but subtly so. With some rhyming, it takes some of ...

I liked this but I felt it wasn't finished. You could add more to this piece and it would be awesome, not that it isn't already ;) Keep Improving :) ...