Wulie

I don't even know you I know the story of your sadness but through these poems I could read your despair and it began to hurt me, I can't comment ...

'tis cool never read something like that :)! I have my 'make history poverty band' 'best bullying' and 'livestrong' band :)! wu x

Cool - thoughts like mine really speically when its sunny and all you want to do is hide but you have to be out in it when all you want ...

oh my god *breaks down* its absolutley wonderful truely it is I love it. The words you use are perfect the set the scene in my mind to perfection. Its ...

I really like this poem actually I donno just seemed to get to the point well written I mean yeah obviously every poem could be better. Water wells Feelings well ...

I like this poem but yet I don't I cant put my finger on it lol sorry this is really unhelpful... I can relate to it because I can picture ...

I liked this poem alot the imagery was lovely ( well you know what I mean lol ) however it feels a tad forced I don't know I maybe wrong... ...

I've read both macbeth and romeo and juliet - due to school. I really disliked macbeth though this could be because I read it in year 9 and my attention ...

they look really good :) I think I shall bring out my inner child for a quick read *mwhaha* :)!

I'm not so sure on this poem it doesn't really make me want to read it again. You know when you read a poem you get that feeling that yeah ...

post moreee!!! :) I want to read on hehe its very well written and I really cant see much wrong with it :)! loveles wu

I really like this I can relate to some of the things you say. Give me some vindication For still I keep my heart on the line Just let me ...

I love the poem it really does have wonderful imagery I guess this is because all of us have expereinced this but you really capture it with your words :)! ...

I'm really sorry but I cant tell you what to change ass there's too many could you maybe post one at a time... too much for my little brain sorry ...

Yet asgain I love this - I do like your poems alot!!! My only saviour holding the key to this whole terrifying experience bathed in celestial light and floating nonchalantly ...