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Re: My Untitled Poem
Hello! First off, I really do like the concept behind this poem, it's really intriguing to say the least. There's a fair amount of imagery that really sets the tone ...
Jul 2, 2017 -
Re: Daffodils
Hiyah! This was absolutely amazing! Throughout the entire story, I could feel my heart pounding, because you described every little detail perfectly. When she was remembering how they met, I ...
Mar 27, 2015 -
Re: Into the Dawn
Wow, that was amazing... It really got my heart pumping! You had enough details for the reader to be able to imagine every single movement, of both the creatures and ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: I Don't Kiss & Tell
This was really, really, I mean really good! Sure, it was short, sweet, and simple, but it was very well written! You wrote in full detail, and I could practically ...
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: Prince Derek and the Road to Nothyng ~ Chapters 1-7 EDITED
Hiyah! I am all too excited to review this story for you, it was really good! I liked how you started the whole thing by telling us the setting, and ...
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: Dead Inside
This was actually really good! You phrased things just right, to where I could paint a perfect picture in my head; but you also left out any details that weren't ...
Mar 25, 2015 -
Re: The Case Of The Sleepy Town Named Death [Ch.1]
This was pretty good, and really action packed! It kept me on my toes the entire time, and your characters were pretty cool! My first thought was, "I like Purple's ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: The Galactic Guardians
That was a really fun read! I'm quite the dork when it comes to this kind of stuff, so I enjoyed every minute of it. I like the adorable 'I'm ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: A Bus Story
Wow, that was definitely an interesting read! I actually quite liked it! Your characters were well developed, where we can differentiate your characters' personalities, and you made them fairly relata
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: The Clepsydra: Chapter 1- Disappearance of Normality
Wow, this was a fun read! Not only did I enjoy reading the Cortes scene, but I also learned something new! I love how you did that, it worked really ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Blank Slate
This is absolutely amazing! The beginning was very captivating, and it had the perfect amount of imagery. It automatically reeled me because of one simple question that I kept asking ...
Mar 22, 2015 -
Re: Dreams of a Warrior
First of all, wow... You really are someone that I will have to keep an eye on, because I could learn a thing or two from you. For instance, your ...
Mar 21, 2015 -
Re: Fear Himself
Wow, this was a really good read! I liked many things about this story, the characters included. Your characters were written well enough for me to be able to feel ...
Mar 21, 2015
