WritingWolf

Hello LazyLlama and welcome to YWS! This is a beautiful, yet short poem. Personally I believe that short poems are usually better then long poems because they require the author ...

Hello again Truth! Wolf here for another review. :) Wonderful beginning. You immediately get to the point, how dark the person/thing speaking actually is. The third line sounds out of ...

Wolf here to do a review! I see that timmyjake has already talked about the formating, so I think I'll leave that be. Lets talk about word choice! I'm pretty ...

I love this! It's so cute/funny/amazing/awesome! First off, I'm impressed with your rhyming. Usually that's one thing that I really struggle with. So I really love it when I see ...

Beautiful work here Rhiasofia! I love the beginning. :) But I think specifying that the songs are rock kinda takes away a bit of the, um... charm? I like how ...

Hello Hadj! Here to do some reviewing. I don't have much time so I'm just gonna go over the first part. I can't decide if I like the beginning or ...

Hello Arif! This is a lovely piece of work. Extremely good in my view. So there really isn't much I can tell you improvement wise. So instead I'm going to ...

Hello Heclgehog! Squire Wolf here to do some reviewing. First I will tell you that everything that I say about the theme/idea behind this will be from more of an ...

Hello Rainn! I've come to review your work. I know that this is your first time doing an abstract poem. So I am going to focus mostly on telling you ...

Beautiful. Just beautiful. I will try and give you a review, but this is going to be really challenging on my part. It's just sooo amazing. So, sense I really ...

Hello Sanju, Wolf is here to do some reviewing! This is a truly lovely piece. But I do believe that Empress has already made that clear, so I will try ...

Wolf is here to do some reviewing! I really don't see much to critique in this piece. I loved it. I really did. I would quite like to give you ...

Hello, Wolf here to do some reviewing! First of all, I have to say that I just loved the way you began this piece. It really caught my attention. Although ...

This was touching. I think it'd be very easy to leave it at that, but then this wouldn't be much of a review. So, then... I really liked your word ...

Hello Deanz! Wolf here to do some reviewing! This is a very short but interesting piece. I personally hope that you will continue it, make it into something longer that ...