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I have to say that I didn't like this either. I'll let my crit speak for itself... Urge A little voice in the back of your head (This does not ...

I thought this was really good and had some good points. Here's some crit And where am I to turn? Friends and family have been abandoned, I am alone. Cannot ...

I understand your feelings and they were expressed, but this wasn't very poetic. As a venting of emotions, I say good job. But as a poem, this definitely needs lots ...

I really liked this. Very descriptive and powerful. Here's some crit Shadows are thrown onto the rocky path Stretching, sinewy shadows that play with muted stones They are the animated ...

5th for structure, but this was good. Here's some crit I think I’ve given a part of myself away today. I think I’ve sold my (what-ever) soul. I think that ...

I thought this was really good and really captured the emotion well. There were just a few things I didn't like... Firstly, my pet peeve is spelling, so I would ...

This was really pretty and kind of cool, but I usually let my crit speak for itself, so here is some crit. At the crack of dawn the fog came ...

It did have a lot of emotions... yes, and I thought you expressed it very well. Here's some crit Hello my friend (interesting choice for beginning. Not bad, but interesting) ...

I thought this was pretty good. Not that poeti, but good. here's some crit. Of all the poems I’ve sat and written About you, my feelings, and my confusion This ...

I thought it was really good. Great description first of all and I liked the way you started it. It drew you in immediately. As said before, it was a ...

Yay tinkerbell!!! You submitted a poem! Em, this was okaay. I really don't know what to say. I'll let my crit speak for itself... As I wait here (good beginning ...

Hm... this was interesting. It had an interesting theme and such, but here's some crit. She went on a journey of self discovery , (You state your theme in the ...

This was pretty good. Here's some crit. Lowway Ancient trails of brush free anger ....(Not the best beginning, but good) Line his face like an old glove (nice) That has ...

I did like this. It was kind of freewrite and not very poetic, but the emotion made up for it. Very pretty. I think we all have a mask we ...

I didn't like this Firstly, I don't like suicide poems generally, so I may be a little biased. I didn't like your short lines. They were just telling a story ...