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This was interesting, but there were parts I did not like. Time has passed and I have healed, So don't think I still feel for you. The tide’s gone out ...

The first part was very good besides the things that people mentioned above. The only other thing I noticed was here you say: "Look around your necks ... each one ...

Wow, this was really good. I really enjoyed this Liz. The only thing I caught was that obstuctions should be obstructions I believe. This was beautiful. You portrayed the girl's ...

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I think that I get this and I really, really liked it. Very nice work. The only thing that bugged me was that you wrote the word 'anatomical art' twice ...

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As Snoink stated, the repetition got a little annoying. Words like frozen/freeze/froze were repeated and had an effect at first, but on the second one, it didn't leave an impression ...

This is really nice. Not overly complicated, but not too simple either. There were just a few spelling errors I found and one thing that didn't like. Weill always be ...

I liked this poem, but for I as well there were things I didn't like. Life is a wind tossed wave that rushes for the shore, time is rushing by, ...

I enjoyed this poem for the most part, but had a few suggestions Hope, so evasive and fleeting (beautiful beginning) In a world so cruel and callous (Okay, cruel and ...

I enjoyed this poem very much. I loved some of your images. the city has lost a certain hold inside ---(this is a little confusing, but it's probably just me. ...

I thought this was very intriguing and very well-written. Excellent. I had only one suggestion. around my throat you came so close to stopping me alive in jail, alive and ...

I really enjoyed this poem because it is a very good subject and is well-expressed. I was not fond of the last line because it sounds awkward with the rest ...

I thought this was pretty good, but I'll critique it for you and let that speak. Ah, it is good to be back Drilled and invaded at the hands of ...

This was really funny and clever. I loved how you wrote a poem about hating poetry. That's cool. The one thing that bothered me was how you changed rhyme schemes ...