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I have to agree with bubblewrapped here... Firstly, as bubblewrapped said, it seemed like just word-building. You were throwing out a bunch of contrasts and it seemed as if they ...

I just recently started Eragon and am really enjoying it for the most part. I wasn't extremely impressed with his writing quality (which really disappointed me because, being a bestseller, ...

Canthor lunged at Agron with great force and wrapped his hands around his head with a powerful (Good description here, but I would suggest more. Make Canthor dangerous, frightening. 'With ...

I thought this was interesting, pretty good, but it seemed a little cliche... I'll let my crit speak for itself. I'm a seascape you painted Look closely, amid the blues ...

A prologue by the prologue slayer :wink: Anyways, I have to say I agree with Snoink and Erethror. The information is good to know for the story, but I'm sure ...

Okay... this was... interesting, It didn't really touch me and didn't seem to really have a powerful point, but I guess I will critique it... Fly (Okay, firstly, this title ...

I have to say I agree with comments above... It seemed like someone was just venting emotions in random ways instead of trying to create a poem out of it. ...

I have to say that I agree with Chevy here. It wasn't terribly boring and awful, but it had me just sitting there, staring at the screen with no real ...

My thoughts basically echo those of aboce. Your last few stanzas were great; I really enjoyed, but your first stanza made me wince a little. Are you really going to ...

I thought this was pretty good. When I first read, I wasn't sure what I thought of it because it's not my style, but after reading it again, it is ...

I thought this had some very good word uses and overall, I liked it, but the rhythm bugged me. I understand that not all poems should rhythm, but with your ...

It describes Writer's Block so well, I couldn't help but to like it... blank except for the words I mean to write; empty except for the torrent of good ideas ...

I thought this was interesting, but I can't say I really liked it. Firstly, it seemd a little... I dunno... too SIMPLE. Don't take me wrong, simple is not usually ...

As PsyLynx said, the beginning was really good; I enjoyed how you painted a picture that brought me to the moment; I could almost see the scenes you described, but ...

I actually enjoyed this. It was very interesting and really intrigued me. The only things I didn't like were your usage of the word 'smashed'. I'm sorry, but 'smashed the ...