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Re: If Toys Could Talk
The first thing I did when I finished reading this was sigh deeply, smile and say, "That was good." That was SO good! This is a unique story, telling the ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful- Chapter Two
Hello there! I'm back to review another chapter of this great story! :) This is quite interesting, reading two different POV's on the same scene! I love writings like that. ...
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: What Once Was
Awww...those last few lines were very emotional. Personally this is something everyone can relate to, including me, because love is so very much exactly like this these days. You have ...
Aug 7, 2013 -
Re: Teachers Lounge - Chapter 2
Hello, I'm back for another review! I just realized there were more parts. I thought there was only one, but turns out there's more! :) Wow wow wow... I'm touched. ...
Aug 6, 2013 -
Re: Beautiful
Wow. I have so much to say! Good things of course! This was awesome. It's definitely taken my breath away, along with my sense of speech. Where to start... First ...
Aug 6, 2013 -
Re: Special - Prologue
Hello! Welcome to YWS! ...I probably am not suited to greet people to the website yet, am I? I just joined a few hours ago, but still... WELCOME! :) You're ...
Aug 5, 2013 -
Re: Last Summer
Whoa, this is pretty good! :) This is a relative topic and many people can relate to this, including me. Stupid guys. I really like this poem because it flows ...
Aug 5, 2013 -
Re: Teachers Lounge - Chapter 1
I have to say, it's cool to read something from a teacher's point of view. Usually the story focuses on the people in the play, but this is focusing on ...
Aug 5, 2013 -
Re: She Felt Cold
Whoaaa. That was breath taking. I actually thought for a second Chase was real! You made Chase and Emma seem so real I thought they were real people! Good job ...
Aug 5, 2013 -
Re: Divided (Chapter 1)
Oh my goodness that was so good! Speechless. I didn't see any grammar mistakes, so good job on that. I like the way your sentences flow together. I love this ...
Aug 5, 2013