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Re: Ink on Paper
Hi there! I'm here to weave a quick review! First Impressions This is a wonderful poem that talks about the importance of art and imagination. It talks about looking beyond ...
Jan 6, 2024 -
Re: A Brief Bit of Murder to Start the Day Strong
Hi there! I'm just here to weave a quick review! ♡ First impresions This is a *very* interesting short story describing a murder from the perspective of the victim. Unique ...
Jan 4, 2024 -
Re: The Songs of The Witch
Hi there! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Top Graham Cracker : The young witch is safe with the older witch, but has almost no company; so when ...
Dec 26, 2023 -
Re: 25 Celebratory Christmas Tales (Part two) (Tales 14-25)
Hello! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! I'll be talking about tale 14- An old toy. Top Graham Cracker - What I Know Ok, so first impressions: I ...
Dec 18, 2023 -
Re: If Only They Knew
Hi there! I just wanted to drop a review on this piece. *First impressions*: Ok, so I love the way you've described seeing your family and peers smiling, even though ...
Dec 18, 2023 -
Re: Uncomfortable
Wow. I felt your words on such a level that I felt deeply uncomfortable. It's like nothing's right; the contradiction in every line offered a very interesting voice. My favourite ...
Nov 19, 2023 -
Re: the day my dad died
I cried while reading this beautiful story. Your voice as a narrator seems as calm as the placid waters of a lake, in spite of a the raw emotion in ...
Nov 19, 2023 -
Re: Dark
Hi! I wanted to drop a quick review here. I love the title: "Dark". It's concise but spine-tingling. The descriptions are good, and my favourite part was probably this: "she ...
Nov 19, 2023 -
Re: Lost to the Sea
Hi! First of all, I wanted to say, I've joined recently too! The story was written very well, and the idea is original and very unique. Although the length of ...
Nov 18, 2023 -
Re: The First and Last Time I Had an Anxiety Attack
Wow. Just...wow. First of all, I'm so sorry you had to go through all of that. You are very brave for having the courage to battle it- and silently, no ...
Nov 18, 2023 -
Re: Frozen Lake
Wow! I love the raw emotion in trapped within the verses of this poem. The metaphor/symbol of a frozen lake gives the reader liberty to connect these words to their ...
Nov 18, 2023 -
Re: Villainess
"Every villain is a hero in their own mind." This is wonderfully written because of the emotion captured in just one paragraph. First of all, the title. "Villainess". It's really ...
Nov 18, 2023