Willard

this poem would be a lot better if it felt like an actual poem.

Don't worry, some people don't understand the art of being meta.

No? Calm down, dude. I see one "review", I make one comment, and you act like I'm out for your blood. For Christ sake.

Still.

:^)

It's not harsh, exactly. This review was, in a sense, just a cheap point grab to get points to post your chapter a minute later. People usually don't review out ...

Don't review any of my works again, please. You took the place of another Green Rook review and this barely related to the topic of my poem.

You literally cheated yourself out of two reviews.

Blue; sad color. Blue moon; rare. Aka I'm not feeling sorry.

Blue; sad color. Blue moon; rare. Aka I'm not feeling sorry.

Yeah, Wam, GLaDOS was actually respectable. You just jumped the gun.

You realize that the last stanza is the punchline, right? I'm mixing something I love, pizza, with something I hate, dead dogs. So yeah, if it doesn't fit then it ...

You realize that the last stanza is the punchline, right? I'm mixing something I love, pizza, with something I hate, dead dogs. So yeah, if it doesn't fit then it ...

It isn't, haha.

Reminds me of a poem.