Wiggy

Like the story, Chantel! It reminded me of this email that I got on the Pillsbury doughboy and how he died of a yeast infection and whatnot...good stuff!

I'll...erm...pass on that? Sounds like an interminable journey to me!

OMG I'm loooovin' this story!!!! Post more, more I say!

I wanna hear more of this!!!!!! It's soooo entertaining! lol

Awesome Snoink. A deserving tribute to our wonderful Sam!!!!!

Thanks guys. You all rock. :D I'll prolly end up scrapping the third stanza or just rewriting it so at least there's some bridge between the second and fourth stanzas.

I like the story so far! I suggest separating your paragraphs-makes for an easier read. :D

Loved the interjectioned thoughts. You had awesome description, and here's a hearty congrats on a great job!

I liked this a lot. Cute story, great characters, and everyone else already critted what I wanted to say. :D

I loved the story! That was a great plot twist about being in a novel. I totally didn't expect it! Keep writing! Wiggy ;)

I like the story! Just work on your grammar and punctuation. :D

No prob! Anytime...:D

Yay-Brad liked my poem!!!! *breathes out* I always love when that happens! And Pros-thanks for the crit. I really need to rev up this poem. XD I haven't read this ...

Random ending...which I liked! It sounded like a story more than a poem. I would suggest changing this to fiction or something.

I love the "emoceans" thing. That is sooo cool! I can't crit this because I can't find anything! I'll just tell ya I love it! Wiggy ;)