Wiggy

I know what you mean aero. :D I'm sooo sorry I haven't done the crit yet. OMG seriously I hate chemistry!!!!! I've got a test that I have to go ...

This was a pretty good poem. There were a couple of things I noticed though: Since in the six months that you've been gone you haven't written once, This line ...

Strong, wealthy, and ruled by a pair seemingly blessed by the gods In this sentence, this seemed like a fragment. Maybe word it a little differently. Merchants from far and ...

Welp, everything's been stated before I could crit-again! My favorite was the plot twist, although I am sad for the girl. :( But the only thing I noticed was that ...

It's awesome!!!! Like I've stated time and time again, I love your work Brad. :D Wiggy ;)

All right, DD, I promised I'd start to crit it, so here's the crit for the introduction! lol My crits are in italics. The very first Chair of Wind and ...

Yes, it seemed very forced to me, but it's always nice to get rants out, no? ;) All I can recommend is don't show this poem to him! lol Wiggy ...

Okay, I'll be brutally honest: this poem was nothing special. For some reason, I couldn't connect with it. It seemed devoid of emotion, and it just seemed like you were ...

I really liked it!!!! I'm a sucker for rhyming poems...:D The only thing I notice was that this line seemed to not flow as well as the rest of your ...

Awesomely awesome Ari!!!!! I've always loved your work...:D Wiggy ;)

I loved it!!!! You have such a great way of describing even the most miniscule things, Snoink. :D Great job! Wiggy ;) As yoha said, then gold stars!

What Myth said. Like it so far, fellow Great Potato Famine buff! :D Wiggy ;)

Yay for Dreamy! :D Yup-I give Sharty the award for most funny sarcastic person on here. Who's with me? Wiggy ;)

You don't have to capitalize the first word of every line-sometimes it makes more sense if you don't. I really like this poem, and anything I'd have to say Cal ...

I challenge you to add more feeling to this. It's a nice start, but it's cliche. Add a twist to it that will make people feel the power of your ...