WhiteTiger93

hmmm, I like the story. I like it a lot. The reason for this is because he seems arrogant. When a lot of people write - myself included - they ...

I don't know what it is, but stories about gay people just seem...more intense. Most of the time. Anyway, because of that, I'm really picky when I go to read ...

Fantastic. I really like this. I am a big fan of free verse poetry and I'm very picky when it comes to it, but you did a good job. There ...

I actually really like this. It is an interesting story idea, and apart from the minor grammatical errors (I won't go into detail, almost all were given my the others) ...

I like this alot. As soon as I started reading this I felt a sort of...comfortable atmosphere. Your character seems deep, smart and interesting. It's hard to portray charaxters as ...

I actually like this. Fantasy fiction is my favorite type of writing and I'm very picky, but I would read this. It's interesting and leaves you waiting for the next ...

This was very interseting, and very good. Oh, and bonus points for originality. I've never heard anything like this...and yes I mean that in a good way. The only thing ...

I was impressed at some parts and well, not so impressed at others. I mean none of it was bad - and I would just like to say that your ...

I really liked this. I love the way the story is written from a child's perspective. It had a few grammatical errors here and there but other than that i ...