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Hey there! Tiger here for a review! Okay, overall, this is a very suspenseful story! There are a few things that you need to work on to make this great, ...

Hello There! Tiger here to review! I would like to say first, before I get into the icky stuff, that though a bit cliche, I do like the story overall. ...

Hello there! Tiger here! :D So, here goes. Sorry if this sounds a bit harsh in advance. 1. You have lots of emotions. And you flit between them too quickly. ...

Hello there! I'm Tiger here to review! :D Now, I just want to say that this is very confusing. Extremely, in fact. And I believe this is because you automatically ...

Hello there! Tiger here to give you a review! :D First off, I'd like to say that I liked this a lot. Many people find it hard to write stories ...

Hey Brainy! Tigress here to review for you yet again! :D Now before I start, I just want to say that your poetry is lovely. I'm not very good at ...

Hi, I'm Tigress and I'll be your reviewer for the day. :D First, let me say that I really like this, but as always, there is some thing that could ...

Hey there! Tigress here and ready to reveiw. :D First, you had a hard time making the poem flow. I couldn't read it through without stopping at every other line ...

Hey Kay! I'm Tigress, here to review for you! :D First things first. You have too much repetition. Your couple of sentences repeated themselves and since that is supposed to ...

Hello, I'm WhiteTiger, or Tigress, and I will be your reveiwer today. :) First things first, I loved your story. If I read this in a bookstore I wouldn't hesistate ...

Hello there, WhiteTiger here. Though I'm also know as Tigress. :) I'm here to be your reveiwer today, so here goes! First, I really do like your story. It was ...

1. Wicked series - Nacy Holder and Debby...something. lol 2. Guardians if Time series - Marianne Curley 3. Book Theif - Markus Zusack (something like that) 4. Hunger Games - ...

Personally, I hate Shimmer by Dallas Reed. I mean, the actual story wasn't that bad, but the writing was really repetitive and annoying. Plus, the characters were either, cliche, unrealistic, ...

Alright, so I like your idea here. It's a bit typical and overused, but it's hard to tell being that this is only the prolouge. So far your character seems ...

I guess it all started when my mum left. I didn't like this opening. This is very cliche and overused. It made me think 'Here we go again,' type of ...