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Re: My Promise
I also go with woeth he is right you could have done that and you should read it before you publish , a cute poem to say but a big ...
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Re: God
It was very good story full of suspense you mean the fat lady was the messenger of god as she was trying to save her but he died for a ...
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Re: Alfredo the Cowardly T. Rex - Chapter 1
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Jan 31, 2016
This is the best story. First by hearing the name I thought it was the copy of COURAGE THE COWARDLY DOG, but it was something else I see Alfredo is ... -
Re: The Myth- Chapter seven; I'm awesome!
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Jan 30, 2016
: Your description is pretty good and paints a good picture, though I feel like you could give a little bit more. I love how you described the forest. It ... -
Re: Murder Inn
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Jan 30, 2016
Awesome and fantastic it is you are doing good Rockefeller is quite suspense pleas keep writing and write more story this story is great so why don't you try to ... -
Re: What If?
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Jan 30, 2016
Awesome and fantastic it is you are doing good Rockefeller is quite suspense pleas keep writing and write more story this story is great so why don't you try to ... -
Re: Unfinished.
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Jan 30, 2016
Awesome and fantastic it is you are doing good Rockefeller is quite suspense pleas keep writing and write more story this story is great so why don't you try to ... -
Re: The Sound Of Silence
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Jan 23, 2016
Hello again :D I'm going to suggest edits just like before! I hope they help! He had, originally been a devout man of god, but after working here (this word ... -
Re: hands made of sandalwood
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Jan 23, 2016
One fine day........ All seven friends were walking in their college garden.. Peter: Guys!! there is something I want share with you. Mickey: What? Hurry up. Peter: Never mind. Its ... -
Re: And isn't that unfair
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Jan 22, 2016
Mirror is brazed and image scattered. I find no place where I cant wish. Have faith in one and only one. The faith in you may never leave sight. It ... -
Re: Learning to Let Go
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Jan 22, 2016
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Re: In Memory
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Jan 22, 2016
This is really good! It's emotional and descriptive, you'll be able to connect with a lot of readers this way! Only thing I would like to point out to you ... -
Re: Societys Image Of Me
Nice poem. Couple things: 1.) "no one understand." You may have wanted that to be: "no one understands." 2.)"others say why the not." You might have wanted to say: "others ...
Jan 22, 2016
