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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Promise

    I also go with woeth he is right you could have done that and you should read it before you publish , a cute poem to say but a big ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Narrative Re: God

    It was very good story full of suspense you mean the fat lady was the messenger of god as she was trying to save her but he died for a ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Alfredo the Cowardly T. Rex - Chapter 1

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    This is the best story. First by hearing the name I thought it was the copy of COURAGE THE COWARDLY DOG, but it was something else I see Alfredo is ...

    Jan 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth- Chapter seven; I'm awesome!

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    : Your description is pretty good and paints a good picture, though I feel like you could give a little bit more. I love how you described the forest. It ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Murder Inn

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    Awesome and fantastic it is you are doing good Rockefeller is quite suspense pleas keep writing and write more story this story is great so why don't you try to ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What If?

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    Awesome and fantastic it is you are doing good Rockefeller is quite suspense pleas keep writing and write more story this story is great so why don't you try to ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Unfinished.

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    Awesome and fantastic it is you are doing good Rockefeller is quite suspense pleas keep writing and write more story this story is great so why don't you try to ...

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: The Sound Of Silence

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    Hello again :D I'm going to suggest edits just like before! I hope they help! He had, originally been a devout man of god, but after working here (this word ...

    Jan 23, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: hands made of sandalwood

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    One fine day........ All seven friends were walking in their college garden.. Peter: Guys!! there is something I want share with you. Mickey: What? Hurry up. Peter: Never mind. Its ...

    Jan 23, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: And isn't that unfair

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    Mirror is brazed and image scattered. I find no place where I cant wish. Have faith in one and only one. The faith in you may never leave sight. It ...

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Learning to Let Go

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    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: In Memory

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    This is really good! It's emotional and descriptive, you'll be able to connect with a lot of readers this way! Only thing I would like to point out to you ...

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Societys Image Of Me

    Nice poem. Couple things: 1.) "no one understand." You may have wanted that to be: "no one understands." 2.)"others say why the not." You might have wanted to say: "others ...

    Jan 22, 2016


The greatest part of a writer’s time is spent in reading, in order to write; a man will turn over half a library to make one book.
— Samuel Johnson