Way2Dawn

I really enjoyed this it wasn't too long or too short simply sweet and very poetic and engaging from start to finish. I can feel the expression of sorrow and ...

Amazingly additive piece of poetry . I have read it at lest seven times still I remotely understand the message you are tring to get through. Is it about missing ...

Let me start of by saying that this is a very nice piece of work. Short and very poetic. The subject of dreams is complex a enigma that will not ...

Sweet however a bit too short. By the time you caught my attention I was already done reading. It does have some potential and I will continue to read on, ...

Interesting to see read the perspective of one who inflicts pain on themselves for reasons unknown by most. Having such a stigma would hard to live with and accept but ...

Always nice to that a writer and shine the most when it comes to passionate subjects. You say that you wrote this in 'the spun of the moment' but i ...

Hey let me start off by saying that I was only able to read the first chapter and write a quick review. However from what I read it seems like ...

Very interesting choice of plot I will admit I'm drawn in by this "story one" and will continue to read on when new ones come for a review you might ...

I liked this piece of work it has a few bumps but altogether a fine job and clearly is related to your feelings towards a girl. Which is nice to ...

Great job on this chapter. You got me hooked on the first line. I must tip my hat to you on how imaginative your story is very interesting choice of ...

Very good start to a potentially compelling story. I like you bring your main character to story the story using her siblings as some what juxtapositions. Interesting how her parents ...

I like this poem a lot. Its creative and fast paced. Interesting that you had this spark in school. Half the time I'm sleeping or getting into trouble for sleeping ...

Nice poem short and sweet. It flowed smoothly and a bit to quickly I think but its your style of writing and I salute you. As a review I got ...

Hey nice piece of fan fiction. I really liked the Assassin's Creed games and you did a fair job in capturing Altair's character. However the only problem I had with ...

Nice start to a possibly engaging story. I wonder if this is your first time writing cause' its really not all that bad I kinda liked it. Now for the ...