Way2Dawn

Usually I do not like the short works, yet this one seems to hit all the right beats. In the end I wanted to read (however there was none). Still ...

Nice work on this poem. If it runs parallel to your life I tip my hat to you for being so honest. I few years ago I lost a close ...

Great work I must say! Eye contact is said to be more important to those who like each other more then words. I suppose that if one looks in a ...

Strange a abnormal poem, yet I like nevertheless. Still not to sure what the meaning is maybe thats the greatness of this. The flow of this poem was crisp and ...

Deep and emotion great for your first post! Hard to tell what the poem was exactly about but I got the remote just of it! Though tell if I am ...

Nice prologue honestly I want to read more. Though at first I didn't expect most due to its short size, yet I was mistaken. Amazing that you were able to ...

Nice little short, yet I wonders what is the hell is going on! I mean I just read a piece before this and it had pie, and rainy day, little, ...

Strange yet somehow captivating. I don't know why but this piece really reminds me of a post world war 2 American day for young children that have nothing better to ...

Deep and emotional I like it! Romantic shorts are not my forte, but this feels much like a dramatic poem or something else of the sort. I would advise moving ...

Quite a dark poem and a good way to start of your profile, yet I wonder did you write this to describe how a scarecrow thinks if if could or ...

Fine way to start off a story a bit too short for my taste but it has me want to read more! Yet it still feels like it lacks proper ...

Interesting take on divine human evolution. Half human and half animal would be a fun way to live...for about a week. But then again I have a naturally boring life. ...

Another great piece of work AkiKersion! I like the imagery you provided of the way the moon would feel if it could. Quite thought provoking the way people see the ...

Fantastic piece to start off on and great all on its own. Socrates was a great philosopher and more then just a man with ideas, he was courageous! He knew ...

Nice poem it was short, sweet, and to the point. Love is still a confusing word for me and I know its not fair ,but to you I plainly see ...