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Re: Brown Bear [part 2]
Well this story is actually about a bad breakup the mother part was just an add in in the end to show his traumas.
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Brown Bear [part 2]
No, I strive for good criticism. I%u2019m just a young writer worried more about plot details than punctuation and grammar but everything it super helpful.
Apr 1, 2020 -
Re: Brown Bear
I wrote a second part and I tried to go into detail but the whole purpose was to just get my feelings about about a past break up that was ...
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: Brown Bear [part 2]
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Re: Toothpaste
I FEEL THIS ALL THE TIME BUT IVE NEVER SEEN ANYTHING WRITTEN ABOUT IT!!!!! this is really amazing I think her story is very relatable to most introverts and people ...
Mar 28, 2020 -
Re: No More Noises
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Mar 27, 2020
I think this is really good. I really hope this is actually hinting at a deeper meaning, I don’t quite know past the point of “I don’t really want to ... -
Re: Brown Bear [part 2]
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Mar 27, 2020 -
Re: Brown Bear [part 2]
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Re: The Script
is this like the magnolia? where there are a bunch of stories that intertwine to create one big story? I really liked this a lot, I would suggest using more ...
Mar 27, 2020 -
Re: Brown Bear
Thanks for the grammatical help I really need it, but this was basically just a work of pure passion that was sprung up out of nowhere and I actually wrote ...
Mar 27, 2020 -
Re: Brown Bear
Haha I need to fix some of the grammar and spelling on this so bad.
Feb 29, 2020 -
Re: On The Beach
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Feb 29, 2020
I think this is fantastic, it reminds me a lot of Frankenstein by Mary Shelly in how the character from Frankenstein and the character from your poem both long for ... -
Re: On The Beach
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Feb 29, 2020
I think this is fantastic, it reminds me a lot of Frankenstein by Mary Shelly in how the character from Frankenstein and the character from your poem both long for ... -
Re: Four poems about time
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Feb 29, 2020
remembrance of things past; I think it does an incredible job on reflecting on death physically or even theoretically. I took it as theoretical, as for a broken relationship. I ... -
Re: Four poems about time
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Feb 29, 2020
remembrance of things past; I think it does an incredible job on reflecting on death physically or even theoretically. I took it as theoretical, as for a broken relationship. I ...