Waterlilygirl

Hi, I like this poem but I picked up a few little mistakes. I fallowed you everywhere, Just a little type or spelling mistake, 'Fallowed' should be 'Followed' I’ll be ...

Hi, Okay firstly I really love this. I can't wait to read more. his green eyes stared a t me hard You forgot the a, easily done. All of the ...

Hi, I thought this was quite interesting. I stared at him. “So, to your eyes, I am nothing more than a, what did you say…Pretty Boy?” After "I stared at ...

Firstly, I love this! It's brilliant! At first I was confused, but then I read on and got more and more excited! And addicted. You did though use I a ...

I can relate easily to this Poem. Her family does not see All the scars on her arms They see nothing wrong With the girl all wrapped and twisted This ...

Jose= a 18 year old guy with a little to obedient attitude and medium long jet black hair . EXETREMELY tall and slightly built body and has countless abilities concerning ...

I'll be working on punctuation :) I'm a little crazy, well, alot to be fair. That should be a lot, not alot and ill get all giddy over the sound ...

She opened the book. You could add more detail here, it doesn't sound correct to me Her fingers fumbled within the familiar pages, fragile and frayed. I like the detail ...

That's such a beautiful poem, the words fit together perfectly. The way you stare at me, with your hypnotizing eyes, I fall deeper and deeper in love with you. Is ...

Firstly, such a beautiful poem! I loved it, at parts I did have to re-read. But other than that its Awesome! Drifting I lose my focus from the silver smudges ...

All You can do is stay strong, and fight. After all, you are crazy. I love this line the most. Yes everyone is crazy, in their own way In full ...