WaterVyper

Now, unlike Scarecrow, I mostly give grammar critiques. I agree with Scarecrow on the point that this was well paced and very interesting. I enjoyed reading it, and I'll be ...

One of those old, abandoned and lonely sort of warehouses. You need a comma after the word 'abandoned'. At the moment , Ah, no spaces before a comma. what if ...

This is a nice poem, made me think of my three best friends. The emotions are conveyed quite nicely in this, so I have no problem with that. Now, time ...

People bustled from one place to the next – hardly noticing if one bumped into someone or even a hurried apology was spoken. The last part sounded strange. Perhaps you ...

Hot and sticky I opened my eyes That would be better if you put a comma after the word 'sticky'. You seem to have a slight problem with punctuation. The ...

I love the Darren Shan Saga! I have all of the books and in my opinion, the sixth book was best. 'Vampire Prince' was that one. The trial, betrayal, beautiful. ...

This was very intriguing, and I definitely enjoyed this. PsychicNinja pointed out just about everything, so I can't really add much. However, there was this one little bit: uote]“What’s yours?” ...

Oh yes, I definitely love them! I didn't think the third one was that bad. Well, it was a little bit difficult to keep up with but I loved it! ...

Yes, in fifth or sixth grade. I think Among the Hidden was the one where everything was kind of slow in terms of progression. Poor Jen, though. My definite favorite ...

Yes, I most definitely have. I won a book paper contest with that one. Anyway, I definitely enjoyed it. I haven't read a book that well in ages. After finishing ...

Ah yes, truly brilliant. I loved this. In fact, this is one of the books I keep coming to again and again. Dannyl and Tayend are cute together and I ...

Ooh, definitely! I love Funke and I really want to learn German so I can read the originals! I've just got my copy of Inkdeath and I really want to ...

Ooh, I really liked this one. What happened while she was gone? You really know how to keep the suspense up, a trait that I admire. I remember the Max ...

This is very excellent! Even if this is only the first part, I was intruiged by the mysterious narrator and what is going to happen to both Salim and Khan. ...

I think that this is absolutely beautiful. I could find no mistakes in here, aside from one tiny detail that might or might not be incorrect. It's been a long ...