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Hello, Willow, I doubt you'll read this, but I am here to review! I like how you went straight into it without any comments or author's note, just the pure ...

Hello jennydragonlover! I doubt you'll read this, but I'm reviewing anyway. I've read the first two chapters, which were both an amazing read. I haven't read many stories that really ...

Hello Mythman! I have noticed this story is older than me by just a little under an year. I doubt you'll ever read this, but I'm reviewing anyways. Why? Because ...

Hello, Lollipop! I know you may never read this, but I found your story interesting so I'll review it. About ten years later. Alsana was shocked by the news. I ...

Hello FlamingPhoenix, I came to review your story. Since the first chapters weren't too long and numerous, I decided to take this chance and read them before reviewing. And I'm ...

Hello, Nemeia, finally got to reviewing. So far I'm liking this novel. I can tell you put a lot of effort into creating the universe the main characters are in. ...

Hello, Nemeia, back again for an exciting first chapter. I really liked the prologue, so I decided I'd read this one. The world-building is amazing, which is probably what caught ...

Hello Nemeia, and welcome to YWS! I can see you wasted no time in writing your first story. And a good one at that. The whole atmosphere of this is ...

Hello, Rascalover, how are you doing? This is probably the biggest cliffhangers I've read in a short story. Not that it's bad, I'm just stating it. The story was fine. ...

Ookay, Doomrats, this was a pretty dark story you wrote for high school. For what project did you write it for? Oh, sorry, I'm supposed to review this. So, without ...

Hello there, fellow writer! I want to say a few things about this story. This is nicely done with the Harry Potter and Norse gods. Normally I don't read a ...

Hello, Lezuli, back again for a review! This was an incredible chapter, finally introducing the main characters in the story. There was a lot more description and imagery, so I'll ...

Hello imaginer2018! You have delivered an interesting read. I have to wonder, was this in World War One or World War Two? Well, I guess I should start with my ...

Hello, DeliriumNervosa, hope your writing's going well. Thought I'd read another one of your musings, or essay. I really liked your other one about control, so I was wondering how ...

Hello, VioletFanatasy, and I have to say this is one crazy story. All of these events that are tied to the kid named Jared are sad and depressing, but how ...