WaterSpout

Hello and belated welcome to YWS, MaxaM.M! I hope you're enjoying it here as much as I am. I am going to have to be fast because online class starts ...

This is another sweet and short chapter, Willow, and that's part of the reason why this novel is really great to read. This seemed extensively short compared to the other ...

Hello Willow, once again here for a review! I'm amazed you got this far with the story, it rally shows your commitment back when you were writing this. There are ...

Hello Willow once again! I am here to review your chapter. I can see you stuck with that same length rule you seem to have. If you didn't, there wouldn't ...

Hello Willow once again! Here to review another chapter. So far I can say this has gone in the right direction with all the characters, the magic system (Associations), and ...

Hello Willow once again! This story so far has some interesting characters so far, save for a few clichés. But other than that, I can genuinely say I like them. ...

Hello Willow, here again for another review. So far, this was going in the right direction, save for a cliché in the last chapter and a bit of blandness here ...

Hello Willow, back again to review yet another chapter of this novel. I've reviewed chapters one through two, but not the prologue, since it's got a ton of feedback. I ...

Hello there, Willow! I've reviewed quite a lot of works from you, mostly this novel. I now have a basic understanding of it, but I'm still not grasping the whole ...

Hello there, dreaming_mouse! I came here to review your third chapter. I will say that I haven't read the last two, so if anything sounds confusing, just ignore it. But ...

Hello Willow! This is quite an interesting story you've got there. I really like where this is set and all the descriptions you provided for the reader. So, without further ...

Hello Willow, I'm here to review your work! Yes, I am aware this is older than me, and yes, I am aware you may never see this. But I went ...

Hello Lezuli! Here for a review. I seized this chance immediately when I saw it had one review. Hopefully this doesn't turn out rushed as I am writing this at ...

Hello JacobMoor! I am here to review. While this was indeed long, I enjoy some horror and science fiction, so I decided to read your story. So far, I'm liking ...

Hello there, SilverShadow, I am here to review your chapter! And although I doubt you'll read this, I'll do it anyways. So the first thing I noticed is how you ...