WartyFingleBlaster

Hey Robert, You've been waiting a long time for a review and here it is... It may be brief because I'm currently doing it in IT class. One thing i ...

*sigh* again... I'm back... Your vocabulary is also very linear, you used the same word too much, you missed puntuation and the story didn't grasp me AT ALL!!! summary because ...

I'm back for more, now in science :) Anyway as i was saying. Your first chapter is too long, the first chapter should be around 300 - 400 words long, ...

Hey Robert, You've been waiting a long time for a review and here it is... It may be brief because I'm currently doing it in IT class. One thing i ...

Nothing again... little weird

Sionarama... Sorry but it's time to rip apart your piece of amazing, poetry??? It is a remarkable peice about nothing... I especially liked the part about the ' ' and ...

Hi Karzkin, I have a few questions... Why so many different lines? Why so many likes? Why don't i understand what this even means? Why have speech marks at the ...

Hey Alec, Taylor here... Enjoy my copied review so I can post the intro to my novel I'd just like to say, I struggled to get into this piece, and ...

Very good poem, some grammatical errors like double spaces, random capitals and the fact that is has no structure are pretty much all i could spot. If you would have ...

What a compelling piece, must have taken you years to perfect and months to write.

Very good description with some grammatical errors and one criticism from me personally. My criticism is the fact that this entire chapter is made up of just two paragraphs, it ...

this is just borderline racist, not awfully written but some words were repeated and others were hard to make sense of. try to improve description and story plot, because this ...