Wariofart

Hello, wariofart here for a review. I'm not an expert in really anything related to writing, but I hope I'll be able to help a smidgen. A tall man dressed ...

Sorry, but I think you've got this in the wrong section. General Fiction Novels are not for full novels, just chapters. If you want to post a full book for ...

Hey, ultraviolet, wariofart here for a quick review from JulNo land! First off, can I say I loved this? Really, this was an insanely enjoyable read. I loved the way ...

Hello, wariofart here for a review. I'm learning how to write just like everyone here, so please take my critics with a grain of salt! What do people think about ...

Hey, wariofart here for a review. I'll give my honest feedback on both plot and grammar, but keep in mind I'm not a master (or even very good) at either. ...

Hey, wariofart here for a review! Just a note, I haven't read any new-age vampires book, so I'm probably missing some vampire vocab. I liked the beginning of the piece. ...

Hey, welcome to YWS! I'll be your reviewer for today. First off, try and post more of your story next time. This small piece of text doesn't give me much ...

I liked it! I thought the imagery was great, and didn't mind the cliched stuff as much as Classy did. Sure, it's cliche, but it's also very powerful. "Time had ...

This was definitely interesting, but also pretty confusing. Are you jumping in and out of a flashback? It seemed like it, but i couldn't tell until the end. It was ...

As I walked down the abandoned, over grown street, I could hear the roars and screeching of the once so called animals but now blood thirsty and flesh eating monsters ...

Pretty nice, I liked the action scenes a lot and your characters seem fairly realistic. One thing to change, is that when you were talking about the brambles and the ...

I liked it, I liked it a lot! As Freak said, victory is spelled wrong. As I read it, I got a clear picture of the narrator, and that's great. ...

Nice twist on a classic zombie story! So it's not humans that get infected, it's the animals this time, huh? I'd like to see how this shapes up, obviously it's ...

Hey, like the story so far! Just a few suggestions: 1. The dream sequence at the beginning seemed way to short, and not dramatic enough. If you made it longer ...

I decided to go out early in hopes that the little heat I di d have might begin to melt it away. It took a couple of tries but I ...