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Re: Anxiety Attack (breathe in, breathe out)
Hiya! Berri here for a review! _へ__(‾◡◝ )> I want to start by saying that I have anxiety myself. I tend to freak out over the smallest things and blow ...
Feb 1, 2018 -
Re: The Feelings of Loss
Hello! Berri here for a review! *(*´∀`*)☆ I just want to say, first of all, this reminds me of a song called "Goodbye to a World". It's by Porter Robinson, ...
Jan 31, 2018 -
Re: Never Again
Hello! Berri here for a review! (-‿◦☀) Having a best friend is wonderful, and I know I can relate to this. The way you described all the memories you had ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: A Hug Every Six Thousand Years
Heya! Berri here for a review! (●⌒∇⌒●) First of all, I love the way you write. You're very good with adjectives and emotion, and one of my favorite lines that ...
Jan 30, 2018 -
Re: Broken Records Lyrics At One O'clock
Hello! Berri here for a review! ( ◠ ◡ ◠ ) Let me begin by saying, wow. I can relate to this too, too much. Maybe not the Skype calls or even ...
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: The Law of Wishes and Desire
Hello there! Berri here for a review! (*´∀`*)ノ。+゚ *。 Let me just being by saying, this reminds me a lot of the music video for Porter Robinson's Language , and ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Artifacts/Broken Pottery
(ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:・゚✧ Hello there! Berri here for a review! Wow. These lyrics are great!! I love the way you rhyme and the way you said things like "...all the butterscotch that ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: A Writer's Afterlife
Hello! Berri here for a review!! ゚.+:。(≧∇≦)ノ゚.+:。 First, let me say something. This reminds me of Dear Evan Hansen. In a good way, of course, but the song "You Will ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Traveler: Flash Fiction
Hello! Berri here for a review. First off, woah. That was amazing. The adrenaline rush I got when I read this was chilling. This was intense. I love the way ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Innocence
Woah. Berri here for a review. First off, I want to say I love the way you worded this. It reminds me of classical poetry, which my literature class is ...
Jan 7, 2018 -
Re: Want to Write Grammatically Correct Dialogue?
This has to be one of the best ways to teach dialogue. It was funny, informative, and useful all at the same time! I'm definitely going to come back to ...
Dec 23, 2017 -
Re: Colors
Woah this is really cool! I liked the buildup as well as the style you used for each color at the end- almost like as if the voice in my ...
Dec 21, 2017 -
Re: del
Wow, this is real. The rhymes are impressive! I especially liked that last bit with the rhyme for amain- that was clever. This is really well written and structured, all ...
Dec 21, 2017 -
Re: Social Mobility
Woah, this is real. The anxiousness I can relate to, as it's what I feel every second of my life; not necessarily on this topic, but the sentence structure and ...
Dec 21, 2017
