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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Anxiety Attack (breathe in, breathe out)

    Hiya! Berri here for a review! _へ__(‾◡◝ )> I want to start by saying that I have anxiety myself. I tend to freak out over the smallest things and blow ...

    Feb 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Feelings of Loss

    Hello! Berri here for a review! *(*´∀`*)☆ I just want to say, first of all, this reminds me of a song called "Goodbye to a World". It's by Porter Robinson, ...

    Jan 31, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Never Again

    Hello! Berri here for a review! (-‿◦☀) Having a best friend is wonderful, and I know I can relate to this. The way you described all the memories you had ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: A Hug Every Six Thousand Years

    Heya! Berri here for a review! (●⌒∇⌒●) First of all, I love the way you write. You're very good with adjectives and emotion, and one of my favorite lines that ...

    Jan 30, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken Records Lyrics At One O'clock

    Hello! Berri here for a review! ( ◠ ◡ ◠ ) Let me begin by saying, wow. I can relate to this too, too much. Maybe not the Skype calls or even ...

    Jan 29, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Law of Wishes and Desire

    Hello there! Berri here for a review! (*´∀`*)ノ。+゚ *。 Let me just being by saying, this reminds me a lot of the music video for Porter Robinson's Language , and ...

    Jan 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Artifacts/Broken Pottery

    (ノ´ヮ´)ノ*:・゚✧ Hello there! Berri here for a review! Wow. These lyrics are great!! I love the way you rhyme and the way you said things like "...all the butterscotch that ...

    Jan 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: A Writer's Afterlife

    Hello! Berri here for a review!! ゚.+:。(≧∇≦)ノ゚.+:。 First, let me say something. This reminds me of Dear Evan Hansen. In a good way, of course, but the song "You Will ...

    Jan 17, 2018
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Traveler: Flash Fiction

    Hello! Berri here for a review. First off, woah. That was amazing. The adrenaline rush I got when I read this was chilling. This was intense. I love the way ...

    Jan 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Innocence

    Woah. Berri here for a review. First off, I want to say I love the way you worded this. It reminds me of classical poetry, which my literature class is ...

    Jan 7, 2018
  • Short Story » Realistic, Humor Re: Want to Write Grammatically Correct Dialogue?

    This has to be one of the best ways to teach dialogue. It was funny, informative, and useful all at the same time! I'm definitely going to come back to ...

    Dec 23, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Colors

    Woah this is really cool! I liked the buildup as well as the style you used for each color at the end- almost like as if the voice in my ...

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: del

    Wow, this is real. The rhymes are impressive! I especially liked that last bit with the rhyme for amain- that was clever. This is really well written and structured, all ...

    Dec 21, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Social Mobility

    Woah, this is real. The anxiousness I can relate to, as it's what I feel every second of my life; not necessarily on this topic, but the sentence structure and ...

    Dec 21, 2017


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