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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Silent Speaker (Prologue)

    Hey there! So the title of this story intrigued me. The thought of a silent speakers like telekinetic people is a generous notion actually. :) I liked how the chapter ...

    Jul 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Insomnia

    Hey, FromWithin! Waltzing here! Kill me now, how come I only saw this today?! XD I love this so much. You have beautiful imagery and diction! it's making me jealous ...

    Jul 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Visible and The Invisible- Chapter 2

    Here I am again! I thought of ignoring him and staying in my place for a while. -So all verbs would be parallel. In return, I yelled irritably, “Don’t I ...

    Jun 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Thick Heart

    *salutes* Here for a review, and a review I will give to this wonderfully penned work. I'm not much of a poetry buff to criticize your work on the technical ...

    Jun 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: The Visible and The Invisible- Chapter 1

    Hey there! Here to review your chapter! *pops confetti canon* Yay! First the nitpicks so I can drown you in praises later on: “Dad, I will be going to Kaniyakumari ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Book Lender

    *salutes* Here for a review! Came by your title, found it interesting...and boy, I'm glad I read it! It's a really cute story you got here. I love how you ...

    Jun 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: His Dirty Deed | Unedited

    Heyo! Here to return the favor since you reviewed my works! ^^ I love this, really I do. The reality of the struggles of this guy was clearly very evident ...

    Jun 17, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Our Generation is Obsessed With Perfection and Popularity: Are you One of Them?

    *salutes* Greetings, YWSer! Stopped by for a review on an essay since...it's totally my fave kind of work to review. :) Alright first off, you picked a nice topic to ...

    Jun 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Dramatic Re: The Drowners -1-

    *salutes* Passing by, found a cool title, decided to read the chapter... definitely not disappointed. ;) I love where this story is going! It is sad and true: realistic and ...

    Jun 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Heart of Silver Gold: Chapter One

    *salutes* Here for a review! I will first enumerate on the nitpicks: I run down my stairs to see my mom and dad smiling at me; the smell of freshly ...

    Jun 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: A Wind Twin. Part One.

    Hey! Welcome to YWS! :) Just dropped by for a review. So, I see that this one's your first work here. This part one was okay, but I saw a ...

    Jun 9, 2015
  • Script » General, General Re: The Voice

    Good god, I love this! :D I really do! The music and the camera angles were perfect for the atmosphere, the story itself is a great concept. The concept of ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Tallon chapter 1

    Hey there! This seems like an interesting read when the rest of it comes out. I liked how nonchalant your main narrator for this chapter was and also the cliffhanger(ish) ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Her Boss | Unedited

    Happy review day!!! Even though I'm not part of the teams cuz I have an appointment today! First of all, thank you for making that request, and giving me such ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Dramatic Re: Don't go

    Hello! Here for a review! Just like to say that i love this. The story is true to all of those clingy loves! I had a similar experience too with ...

    May 27, 2015


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