WallFlower

That was really interesting. You had a lot of good stuff in there. I got a little bit lost for parts of it, but the idea behind the poem is ...

Hi there :) This is really motivational, especially for me because I am ALWAYS my own worst critic. I am generally disappointed with everything I write, which I know is ...

Hi there :) I love the attention you pay to detail. You have a beautiful way of describing things. You’re really pulling me into the story and making me feel ...

I actually read Chapter 2 before this one, and that was so good that I had to come back and read chapter one. And I wasn’t disappointed. This story is ...

Wow. This was really good. It took me until about the third paragraph to get pulled into the story, but once I got there I couldn't leave. The story is ...

That was awesome! I thought it was going to have a happy ending, which I would have been a little disappointed at. But the ending was perfect. Nice job. Little ...

Hi there :) Honestly, for me, I was never completely pulled into this story. You did a good job of telling me what happened, but I never felt any emotion ...

0.0 From the first word you had me hooked. And then it was a crazy roller coaster ride from beginning to end. I LOVED this story. I'm kind of jealous ...

This is really sweet. I love the way you show his awkwardness. And him stumbling over his words was great. The awkwardness is the best part of this whole story. ...

Hi there :) First off, I really like how you separated the first and last lines from the rest of the poem. I love the thoughts behind the poem: sunlight ...

Hi :) First of all, you have a really good way of phrasing things. It is almost poetic, in my opinion. Separating "tick," "tock," and the two "falling"s really helped ...

This is so sweet! I can easily picture everything that's happening, even Rich's longing for a child of his own. You did a great job of showing his emotions and ...

Yes, this is poetry :) Very true poetry, I might add. My favorite part (even though it's like half the poem :P): It plays with your mind. Rips and tears ...

Wow... This is so sweet and so incredibly sad. It's a beautiful piece, and you clearly convey your sadness and regret. All the misguided, landslided underhanded underminded things Every well-meant ...

Hi :) Is he going to kill someone (or some thing )? That's what I think is going to happen. I'm a huge fan of this song, and I think ...