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Hiya all thanks for reviews. I'm going on holidays for around 2 months, so I won't be able to post for awhile, but i'm gona edit this bit out and ...

Hmm I see what you mean, it's tricky. Give me a second and i'll try and think of something.

Strange, in the thread were you put worst book most people put Eragon, and in this quite a few people put Eragon.

Kk thanks for review. I'm gona try and edit imagery in, but with my limited skills with imagery that is gona take awhile.

Thanks for the review. I'm going to continue it, never actually made it through more than 3 chaptors on a story before but this time I'm gona try an finish ...

Cheers for the review, i'll work on it. Hey could people please not use capitals, it makes my eyes sore. Thanks

Um could someone please review. Thanks

I like it alot, just on the last line, it upsets the rhythm, take out the "the".

First thats an awsome tital you've got, best tital in the world. A very interesting poem, it has rwal meaning to it. Keep it up.

Wow, that was so deep. Your seriously gona make me cry. And your wrong, thats a very awsome poem. It was so deep, you've really drawn me in with that. ...

I love it, excellent rythem, good use of words, I really liked the first few stanzas.

Thanks everyone.

K thanks vernon you've been really helpful.

K thanks vernon you've been really helpful.

Liked the poem. The flow and ryhthm were its strengths.