VuzzyCat

Really good poem! I agree with the previous comment, but other than those points, I thought it was amazing! And so true. I was impressed of how smoothly everything flowed. ...

Good story! I didn't quite get how he knew too much, but I tend to be slow and probably just didn't catch it. :D Just a few suggestions. When you ...

Really good poem! I loved the message it gave. Really, really, great! I didn't seen any grammer errors. And there was only one part of the poem that I felt ...

Ok, mostly I agree with the comment before, but I have a few other suggestions. Well, first of all, suicide is kinda a touchy subject and I think it is ...

I have never thought about humans that way. This is brilliant! Good job! I was expecting something different when I started to read it, but it impressed me! I loved ...

This is great! I love the imagery, especially in the first stanza. It really drew me in and made me want to keep reading. Good job! I didn't see any ...

This is great! I loved how you said that the man who killed him was just a normal man. And I loved the second to last stanza about everything that ...

Good poem! Really sad, but good! I could feel the emotions through the writing, so great job! I liked the style of the poem, it helped with the emotions. I ...

I thought this poem was really good! I liked how you talked about each red thing. It seemed like a poem you would find in your English text-book about descripive ...

That is pretty good! I loved it! And it is so true... I thought you wrote it pretty well. Even though you said it wasn't all that great, I enjoyed ...

Really good! Just a few things! ~‘Why does Steven think writing down everything was so important?’~ That was, right there, should be changed to "is". ~and if I write down ...

Did you write these all today? Because they are really good! (My favorite is the first one.) I didn't see any grammer errors, so good job. The ideas of them ...

That was really good! I loved the last line being a cliffhanger. Great writing! I didn't see any grammer errors or anything like that, so good job there. The idea ...

That was really good! I loved how paranoid she was and nothing happened. You built up the climax pretty good and then just let it fall. I only have a ...

That was good! I was hoping it was longer! The only part that I felt was out of place were the last two lines. One says you wish you weren't ...